!Emerald Lakes, North Island!
Nouns
Mountains
Pools
Rocks
Sand
Sky
Volcanos
Clouds
Mud
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Adjectives
Dark
Massive
Curved
Smooth
Blue
Red
White, greyish
Brown
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Verbs
Standing still
Resting
Rolling down
Moving
Swaying
banging
Gliding
Sticky
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Adverbs
Protecting
calmly
Fast
Slowly
Peacefully
Loud
Softly
Sliding down
the hill
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End
Animals
On the surfers
Breaking in half
In the wind
Around
On earth
Though the wind
Having fun
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Dark Mountains Standing still Protecting Animals
Massive pools resting calmly on the surfers
Brown sticky mud sliding down the hill having fun
Blue sky swaying peacefully in the nice breeze
Curved rocks rolling down fast breaking in half
White, greyish clouds gliding softly through the wind
こんにちは, Sharelle.
ReplyDeleteI am fond of the fact that you have stuck to the words you have used in your planning, and your writing looks very prepared and prepped, so I congratulate you for that.
I think you could work on your punctuation. Every sentence should end with a full stop. I think that's something you can practice.