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Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Tuhura

HI this is my beautiful bird. 
It is flying in the snow near mount nerves cool.
Its name is could a explour. 
I chose this back round because i like snowy places.
Places i would like to go is egupt Rome and china
Our inquiry in rm 2 is tuia 250 this bird is called the explorer
Explore in Maori is Tūhura  
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 12:22 PM

    Hi Sharelle, I love that you have included what the name was and what you were doing!! Maybe next time you could check your captial letters and puncuation. I like how your bird is flying through the mountains they both look good together as in colour combinations.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 12:23 PM

    Kia Ora Sharelle, I really liked how you explained what you where doing and what your topic was! Next time what you could change is maybe a bigger font or bigger picture! well done Amazing work! Your bird looks like it is actually in the snowy place!

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