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Monday, July 29, 2019

Emerald lakes

                      !Emerald Lakes, North Island!
Nouns
Mountains
Pools
Rocks

Sand
Sky
Volcanos
Clouds

Mud
Adjectives
Dark
Massive
Curved

Smooth
Blue
Red
White, greyish

Brown
Verbs
Standing still
Resting
Rolling down 

Moving
Swaying 
banging
Gliding

Sticky
Adverbs
Protecting 
calmly
Fast

Slowly
Peacefully
Loud
Softly

Sliding down
the hill
End
Animals
On the surfers
Breaking in half
In the wind
Around
On earth
Though the wind

Having fun

Dark Mountains Standing still Protecting Animals
Massive pools resting calmly on the surfers
Brown sticky mud sliding down the hill having fun
Blue sky swaying peacefully in the nice breeze
Curved rocks rolling down fast breaking in half

White, greyish clouds gliding softly through the wind

1 comment:

  1. こんにちは, Sharelle.
    I am fond of the fact that you have stuck to the words you have used in your planning, and your writing looks very prepared and prepped, so I congratulate you for that.
    I think you could work on your punctuation. Every sentence should end with a full stop. I think that's something you can practice.

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